This is the night that you will always remember... | By : Stina Category: Pirates of the Caribbean (All) > Slash - Male/Male > Jack/Will Views: 12516 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
Disclaimer: I do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
Chapter 22
It was late
at night.
Will woke
up with a smile on his face. He felt safe and warm under the thick blanket that
was covered with several furs. He stretched and sighed, licked his lips. His
whole body still seemed to tingle.
It was dark
in the cabin, the thick curtains in front of the windows were closed to keep
the cold out. He reached over to the other side of the bed. Jack was not there
but somehow Will knew that tonight there was no need to worry.
He closed
his eyes. Remembered what Jack had done with him in the last hours. He still
felt the explosion of lust.
It had been
a perfect night.
First Jack
had given him a long massage. That alone was tremendously exciting, because
while massaging him, Jack also kissed him. Kissed him everywhere. On his neck…
The inner side of his thighs… On his buttocks… Then… Between them… Will had
nearly sobbed with lust…
Then Jack
had taken the paddle.
Although
they were now on the open sea for eight days, it was the first time that he
used it. So he started gently, giving Will time to get used again to the
spanking. But he did not need to worry. The first slap alone brought tears of
joy to Will´s eyes. He raised his buttocks to meet the next blow, and Jack
pushed a pillow under his groin to make it more comfortable for him. Although
it was cold outside, their cabin seemed to heat up with every minute. From time
to time Jack used his hand to spank Will, remembering how much he loved it.
Kneeling
close to him, bending over Will, Jack kissed his cheek, wiped back the sweaty
curls. Licked his ear, whispering tender words. Then he continued to spank him,
harder this time. Will cried out with lust, and he then he came for the first
time on this night. But not for the last time.
His body
had recovered quickly… And soon he had snuggled up to Jack, kissing him,
wanting more... He bit his own hand with excitement when Jack knelt between his
legs, when he slid his hard cock slowly between Will´s buttocks. They made love
for what seemed a blissful eternity to Will. At one point they had paused and
Jack had helped Will to turn around. Facing him, he took him again, his arms
wrapped tightly around his body. They prolonged it as much as possible, looking
into each others eyes, full of love. Sometimes they looked down, smiling,
watching how the sun on Will´s body touched the moon on Jack´s skin. Kissing
passionately, they both came again.
For hours
they had laid together by the light of one remaining candle, reviewing the last
weeks. They laughed, giggled, sighed – and sometimes tears glistened in their
eyes.
And looking
at each other as long as possible, keeping their eyes open until the eyelids
became too heavy, they fell asleep.
Yes, it was
a perfect night.
A perfect
night in their new life.
The door
opened and Jack came inside. He had a smile on his face that was so beautiful
that Will instantly knew – something wonderful had happened.
Jack came
close to the bed. “Get up, my love.” he said softly. “You have to see it…”
Will sat
up. “What…?”
Jack just
smiled, put a finger on his lips.
“Shh…
Come…”
He brought
Will´s clothes. Will shivered when he left the warm bed, slipped into his
pants, a thick sweater and a coat, put on his shoes.
He came to
the door.
Jack was
beaming. “Close your eyes…”
Will did it
and Jack opened the door. From behind he put his hands over Will´s eyes, led
him outside. Will knew the ship by heart now and realised that Jack led him to
the stern. Jack´s hands were trembling with excitement. His voice thick with
emotions, he removed his hands.
“See…” he
whispered.
Will opened
his eyes.
The scenery
around him would have been enough to make him stare in awe. The dark ocean was
calm as a mirror. Three huge ice bergs glistened in safe distance.
But it was
the sky that brought tears to his eyes.
Bright colours
were shining through the night, changing from blue to red to purple and back
again. It looked like someone had hung a huge veil from the sky. The veil was
moving, swaying.
Will could
not stop looking at it. A tear rolled down his face. Jack hugged him from
behind, held him tight.
“Do you
remember…?” he whispered and Will knew, he was crying, too.
Will
nodded, smiled through his tears.
“You said
you wanted to see the northern lights with me…”
Jack
swallowed. “I never thought it would happen… But here we are…”
Will
caressed his hands. “On our own ship… Together…”
He turned
his head. “I am so happy, Jack…” he whispered.
Jack hugged
him tighter. “So am I, love…”
Will turned
around in his arms. They were alone at the stern, so he took his face between
his hands. “You are an honourable man now, Jack de la Montez…”
He caressed
his face. “But somehow for me you will always be Captain Jack Sparrow… The
pirate who stole my heart…”
Jack
smiled. “Do you want it back?”
Will shook
his head. “It is yours… Forever…” he whispered. “I love you, Jack Sparrow…”
Jack let
his fingertips run over Will´s face. “And I love you, Will Turner…”
And their
lips met in a tender kiss.
On a night
they would always remember.
The End.
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Yes, now it
is finished… It was hard to finally write the words “The End” (and I know it is
a kitschy end, but it turned out exactly like I imagined the end, nearly from
the beginning on…)
I think I
started this story about two years ago and it grew really close to my heart.
I hope you
all liked it… J
Thank you all
soo much for your encouraging reviews and the patience to read through 22
chapters!!!
I am sure
one day I can´t resist and will write another Jack&Will story. Or a sequel.
Naa, rather a new one. And I bet the movie sequels PotC 2 & 3 will contain
some nice ideas for new stuff.
By the way,
speaking of the sequel – I recently read a report about the filming and that
there will be a new ship in one of the sequels – called ´Endeavour´. Made me
wonder who reads the stuff here. *g* (just kidding, of course there have been
ships in history before with that name. But it was a lovely coincidence).
Oh,
something else – after I had written about five or ten chapters of “This is the
night…”, I wasn´t quite satisfied with the first chapter anymore, I always
thought it was a bit “rushed”. So now, finally I added a few words here and
there, changed a few lines, nothing crucial. Also some lines in the second one.
Even one or two in the love scene. *lol* (While doing this I made some mistakes while uploading. Means now Chapter 1 and 2 are in one chapter and all together there are 22, not 21 chapters. Confusing, sorry, my fault!....) Ah, something else - to Cocoyasha: I don´t want to go too
much into detail, but I DO know – to quote Jack Sparrow – what a man can do and
what a man can´t do (I know it much better than a girl maybe should know *lol*,
and better don´t ask me why, but it´s not from slash fics…). It was intended
artistic license that there was no lube but no pain there either (because I
read way too much stories where miraculously bottles of lube appear out of
nowhere even in the strangest places, and way too much where the bottom screams
in pain when he´s taken for the first time. Because it does not have to be like
that – and again, don´t ask me why, but I DO know.) It really was on purpose
although I knew it would not be that easy in the short time Jack and Will had
in the cell. But I would like to thank you for writing such a long review
(constructive criticism is always appreciated!) although I had some problems to
understand parts of it, grammatically. But I think I got what you meant. And, as you saw, I changed one or two words. ;)
*waves* All
the best to you all!
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