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Raven Riley – Demon Slayer: Succubus	By : MarkusHuset Category: S through Z > Succubus Views: 1780 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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- 1-The Return
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Raven Riley – Demon Slayer: Succubus
Evil Never Dies
Chapter 1: The Return
Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyrighted 2007 with all rights expressly reserved by its author unless explicitly granted. No portion may be reproduced in any fashion without the express written and notarized permission of the author.
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Disclaimer: I do not own Lilith, Raven, Chief Baxter any of the Succubus film characters. All characters are creations of Bethany Burke and those at Evil Motion Pictures, © 2007. I also make no claim of ownership of the character of Lucifer.
NOTE: I am writing this story because I feel intensely compelled to do so. I love the character of Lilith, in all her forms. I owe a huge debt of gratitude to the people at Evil Motion Pictures, for the simple fact that, through this film, they’ve brought a legend to life, and could not have found a better woman to play the part, even if the script could have been written a bit better. But, I digress. On with the story.
“…” – Spoken word
‘…’ – thought
“italics” – Translation/flashback
“Bold” - Spellwork

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Arad, Western Transylvania - Midnight, October 28^th.

A young woman, surely no older than twenty, a head of fiery silken tresses; flesh as pale as the Lady Moon with eyes the color of soft jade awoke suddenly, gasping for air. ‘Where am I?’ she inquired to herself. Looking around, she realized she was in a crypt. Suddenly, memories flooded her mind as she growled lowly in her throat. “The Slayer… That whore will suffer for her transgression!” Rising to her feet, she summoned clothing fitting of the current era onto her lithe body, which consisted of a pair of long, tight jeans flared at the ankles, and a black, sleeveless top. Seeming to glide out of the crypt, she made her way into the city as heads turned, accompanied by scattered catcalls as she made her way through the streets, eventually sauntering into the local tavern.

Sitting down at the bar, she looked into the eyes of the Barkeep as her voice floated from her lips, the sound unearthly in its richness as she spoke effortlessly in the native tongue of the land. “I’ll have a Palinka.”Nodding curtly, The Barkeep handed her the drink. Sipping quietly, she surveyed her surroundings with detached amusement. ‘Foolish mortals. Scurrying about their pathetic lives like cattle… They know not what lies in wait for them.’ A soft laugh floated from her lips at the thought.

Hearing a noise at the door, she turned to gaze at the newcomer, unable to suppress a small gasp of surprise as she beheld him. Raising a thin brow, she mused. ‘Something about this human is quite intriguing… And, also, strangely familiar…’ Her gaze followed the man as he sat down at the bar not two feet away from her. Sensing eyes on him, the man turned to meet her gaze as Lilith looked into the man’s piercing blue eyes. “Hello. I don’t believe I’ve seen you around here before. Are you new to the city?” The man’s deep baritone voice seemed to flow from his lips, causing her mind to cloud with a sensation that she had not felt since…

Lilith was suddenly broken from her reverie as the man spoke once more. “Miss? Are you alright?” Nodding lightly, she took a moment to compose herself before replying. “Yes, I’m fine. As for your question, my answer would be that I have visited before, but not in quite some time. I do not believe that we’ve been properly introduced. My name is…” Taking a moment to come up with a suitable name, so as not to give away her true identity, she smiled. “I am Daciana.” She faked a polite smile, extending her small hand for him to shake, but was considerably surprised when he brought the back of it to his lips.

Smiling at the beautiful young woman before him as he felt the soft skin of her hand graze his lips, Sammael, the fallen angel better known to modern followers of his Father as “Lucifer” could not believe his eyes, thinking surely that they deceived him. For here before him was a young woman that bore an almost unearthly physical resemblance to his lost love. Nodding politely, he too forced a smile before stating a false name. “I am Lucian.” Blushing lightly, Lilith spoke softly. “It is a pleasure to meet you, Lucian.” Signaling to the Barkeep, Sammael ordered a drink for himself as he turned, closing his eyes, painful memories suddenly flooding his mind.

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Sighing softly to himself as he sat on the marble steps that led to the throne hall of his Father, Sammael lightly rested his head on his hand, failing to notice his older brother Michael approach. Startled slightly at the voice, he looked up and smiled lightly. “Hello, brother.” Noticing the far away look on his younger sibling’s face, Michael gently sat beside his brother. “Hello to you too, Sammael. What is it that troubles you?”

Looking to his brother, Sammael gently shook his head, not wanting to tell him how dissatisfied he was with his existence in this realm. How he secretly longed for more. Instead, he smiled, hiding his thoughts. “Nothing, brother.” Placing a hand on his shoulder, Michael stood. “Come. Father wishes to speak to us. He says it is a matter of great importance.” Raising a slender brow in curiosity, Sammael nodded lightly before standing and folding his wings around his body as he would a cloak as they ascended the steps together.

Reaching the throne hall and, upon seeing their Father sitting in his throne at the end, the two celestial beings stepped forward and knelt before him, Michael speaking first. “Greetings, Father. You wished to speak to us?” Nodding, God stood from his throne and walked toward his sons. “Yes, Michael, I did indeed.” Raising his hand, he summoned a mirror and directed it to show him the world he had created. “Do you see these two beings populating my creation, my sons?”

Nodding lightly, the brother’s brows furrowed in confusion. Smiling gently, God magnified the image to observe this new race more closely.”This is indeed my greatest creation. I call them humans. They are an intelligent race, capable of great things. Now, my sons, I must ask you to do this one thing. Looking toward their creator, the two nodded.”I must ask you to bow before them. Love them more than myself.”

As their eyes widened in surprise at their Father’s demand, Sammael looked back toward this new race. Instantly, he saw what these beings were capable of, the good and the bad. He saw how intelligent they were, but also how this intelligence would corrupt them in the end. Turning back to his Father, the younger angel lowered his head. “Father… You are great, wise and just. And I would not think to contradict your judgment. But, I cannot do as you have commanded. These humans are flawed… Murderous. They will destroy all you have worked so hard to create. And how… how can I love them more than you, my Father?”

Michael, having seen these things too, agreed with his brother’s view. But, wanting to obey his Father, consented. And God, seeing his son’s disobedience but understanding why he felt this way, felt he had no choice. Standing, he walked to Sammael and, placing a comforting hand on his shoulder, shook his head as he spoke softly. “I am sorry, my son. But, for disobeying a direct commandment, it is with a heavy heart that I must banish you to Hell.”

His head shooting up to look at his Father upon hearing those words, Sammael slowly shook his head, tears pricking his eyes as he pleaded. “No, Father, please…” Gasping as chains surrounded his body, he sank to his knees from the weight, struggling to free himself as he looked to his brother for help, calling out desperately. “Michael, please. Brother, don’t let him do this…”

Seeing his brother like this, Michael desperately wanted to help him, yet knew that he had to obey his Father’s wish and so, slowly tuned his head as he closed his eyes to block the tears that threatened to escape as the floor disappeared from underneath his brother as he fell, a single tear finally falling as he heard his brother’s screams fade.

And so began his lonely existence as the ruler of Hell. From there, he witnessed humanity's rise with a thinly veiled loathing, though one human in particular intrigued him greatly. He learned that her name was Lilith, the wife of Adam. The pathetic human male had the gall to demand that she bow to him in subservience. The fact that she refused impressed him.

And thus began the relationship that would ultimately doom them both. In order to meet with her, Sammael took the guise of a large serpent and ventured into the Garden of Eden to find Lilith fuming after an argument with Adam. Making his way to her, Sammael began to calm and comfort her as best he could. From that moment, they would meet secretly in the night, hidden from her husband. Eventually, the Angel and the Human gradually fell in love, pledging themselves to one another one night under the Tree of Knowledge.

Seeing this act of defiance, God immediately sent a division of his angels known as Powers to rectify the situation. Advancing upon the peacefully sleeping forms of the two lovers and, as two of the angels hauled Sammael to his feet, beat him as they forced him to watch the remaining Powers torture, beat and rape his beloved.

When the Powers were finished with her, they left the woman's broken and bloodied form lying as they dragged Sammael, screaming and swearing vengeance, back to the Pit. From there, the once beautiful, glorious Angel watched and seethed, waiting patiently for the day when he would seek his well deserved revenge for the death of his beloved. The one being who truly understood.

Shaking his head lightly to clear his mind of the painful images, Sammael threw back his drink easily and stood, smiling lightly, yet somewhat sadly as he turned to the young woman. “It was nice meeting you and I hope to see you again sometime.” Not waiting for a response, Sammael pulled his long coat around him and turned, heading for the door.

Frowning lightly at the mysterious man’s abrupt departure, Lilith quickly probed his mind as she had felt something was troubling him. What she saw there caused her grip to loosen on her glass and it fell, shattering against the stone floor as she softly gasped in recognition. “Beloved…”

Author’s Note: Haha, so she figured it out. I know I changed a few things concerning the storyline of the film, but I consider them to be improvements, honestly. The script and plot of the film itself could have been done much better and these are only a few of my ideas. I hope you enjoyed and please review. Constructive criticism only, NO flames.
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