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by Boshomengro

person gylzgirl
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Jack was kind of a meanie butt in that one. It'll serve him right if next time Nell makes him wait...oh...minutes before letting him have his way :)

Keep 'em comin'
person Andy
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
first off...your very good. *nods* very good. Not many would be able to pull off writing jack as well as you do. It's almost like rexprising jonny deep do the char. I just wish you would write more. >.< I know you will...I just want it now. *sniffles* Did I tell you that you e goe good?
person Serendipity
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story s great, and I hope U keep writing, and don't worry 'bout the dribble since it just increases the suspense. So yay! and UPDATE (or else...*twitch* *twitch*)
Could you send me an e-mail when U update?
person morning glory
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is seriously one of the best stories i have ever written. i started reading it back in august, but totally lost track of it and forgot about it when school started. last night, i randomly stumbled upon it and i couldn't stop reading. it's brilliant, it really is. now i see that you last updated on 9/25, but seeing that i'm new to this and what not, how bout we get another chapter before the end of the weekend? ;-) pretty please? with jack sparrow on top?

speaking of jack sparrow, you're characterization is dead-on. i love how incredibly creative and original this story is. YAY! me want more.
person so great
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i <3 this.
person whyisthissogood?
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing. you're an amazing writer. you must update asap.
person Dixie
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your writing, whole-heartedly! With nothing but subtle editorial issues sprinkled here and there, you have an excellent work and a very entertaining tale.

I adore your Jack interpretation. I think it's dead-on center, and the fact that you can make a less-than-perfect, better-than-demonic compromise of an original character says to me that you have great talent. I hope yoso wso write outside of fanfiction. I would squeal to get to see any original thing you may have/will have written!

(psst. If you'd like some extra help with the typos, I'd be more than pleased to beta [read: get in on the story before anyone else can, MWAH. HA. HA] for you!)
person gylzgirl
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Snakes alive girl! What a place to leave it! :-) I'm holding you to that faster typing thing Awesome as always.


Waiting patiently...NOT! MORE MORE MORE!

Tricia
person penny lane
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the story. It's well written, intelligent and enthralling. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person gylzgirl
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You're just gonna have to learn to write faster :-) This is really great. Good details. Very fleshed out. And so very Jack

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