rate_review Reviews

uhm... is it done? does the story end here? i wasn't quite sure with the comment that you left at the bottom, maybe i overlooked something?
Anyways, i gotta say i have been following your story for quite a while and was always delighted to see updates :D i absolutley love your story and couldn't get enough of it!!
nell and jack are very cute together, i must say and it had me grinning a lot of times.
(aw, she is so naiiv! ^^ but v.sweet)

anyways! i'm sure i'll be reading it one more time (if this is the end) lol, im slightly confused by myself now.. uh... what i intended to say was: GOOD JOB! keep going!

kate

I've been following this story for awhile now, and I just want to tell you you're doing a wonderful job, keep up the good work.

I like Nell, and your other characterizations. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh no!! Poor Nell, that would be terrifying. Find your way back to Jack, please...

It's been nearly a week. If you don't update soon I might lose my mind. Lol.

Pretty please update soon? With a cherry on top?

More, more, more please!!!! Your story is soooo good, I'm totally addicted to it. It's absolutely rivetting and I check daily to see if you've updated it. Fabulous work.

DONT STOP!! this story is wiked!!!

Oh! How could you end it there! These last couple of chapters have made me really quite tense (I'm claustorophobic) but even then I'm absolutly loving your work!

One of the best fan fics i've read yet! Keep it coming.

That cave system bit had me so damn scared. My brother knocked on the door and i screamed...sooooo embarassing.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Absolutely wonderful story. I love the characters. This is just beautiful, thoughtful and well paced. I check daily for updates, hoping for a fix. Excellent work.