rate_review Reviews

More please. I would prefer not to be forced to evicerate you.

I missed you! But your back so you have to write more. I was wondering how Barbossa got a hold of Jack again. Well, good job! Please keep writing?

Yes!!! Finally you updated! I like this story and minial amt of spelling and grammar mistakes mak eve even more enjoyable to read. Keep it coming!

Good beginning. I need to go back and read the prequel.....again.

Wow-great chapter! I loved it! I was a bit confused at first when I started reading it and it was about Will in a smithy, and I thought that it was a different story, but I caught on (eventually.... *-* tee hee). And I thought it was wonderfully written, though I'd have liked to have had more of the fight scene between Will and the 3 other pirates...but that's ok. I can't wait for bath time!!! Yay!!!! That'll be fun! Will there be bubbles, and strawberry soap fun?!?!?! Just kid! Bu! But I still can't wait! Update soon!
Cheers!
Orli's Lover

Great start! Upgrade soon! And dont hurt Will. :)

an update! Is very happy. Nice chapter, I'm lng fng forward to the Jack/Will action.