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Provocative

Not bad, really, for a slash, I must say though - Jack didn't teach Elizabeth the pirate song, it was vice-versa. Elizabeth knew the song from when she was a child. It's also in the deleted scenes, I remember it clearly.

"Well, we have to do something!"
"You're absolutely right." *Jack sends his second bottle of rum rolling towards her in the sand and drinks from his own* "Here's luck to ye, Will."
*Elizabeth picks up the bottle and uncaps it, sits down beside Jack* "Drink up, me hearties, yo ho." *drinks*
"What was that?"
"What whatwhat? ... Just... a song about pirates, I learned it as a child."
"Well, let's hear it then."
*Elizabeth hesitates*
"Well, we've got the time!! Come on, let's have it."

*later*

"Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life for me!!"

So yeah. She taught him the song. That's all!

I like it, a sweet introspective look at Jack. It's a nice lead up to the beach scene, and offers us slashers a little insight. ;)

Well done. Hope you come out with more soon.

-Aithilin

good choice of movie to do a fan fic on...and good choice of music too *thumbs up* its people like you that make me proud!