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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue please
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another interesting pairing I haven't read before. A very cool story, too. An abusive relationship that suffering can't get out of... I like it a lot.
I hope you add another chapter. This is a good story. Don't let it stop.
I hope you add another chapter. This is a good story. Don't let it stop.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Charlie! Hi, lovelies!
Why have you nontiontinued this one?
I do like it, I like the premise, the ideas you've shown.
But the only thing stopping me is the lack of detail. The sweet, juicy feeling and detail I know you can put into this thing. Oh, yes. If you re-did this a bit, fleshed it out, showed how all this is working in thier heads...possibly in an expansion of this chapter that I would LOVE to see, then I'd be an instant followerperspersonally found all these men extremely tasty, and a bit of a happening with them is DEFINITELY a good thing.Ahhhhh..where DID my Kleenex go to, anyhow?^_~
I see potential here, and you've got the ability to make another great piece of art. Will you write more for me? Please? For your honey? *gives you his huge puppy eyes with all his hair falling around his face and his hands wringing*
-Josh
Why have you nontiontinued this one?
I do like it, I like the premise, the ideas you've shown.
But the only thing stopping me is the lack of detail. The sweet, juicy feeling and detail I know you can put into this thing. Oh, yes. If you re-did this a bit, fleshed it out, showed how all this is working in thier heads...possibly in an expansion of this chapter that I would LOVE to see, then I'd be an instant followerperspersonally found all these men extremely tasty, and a bit of a happening with them is DEFINITELY a good thing.Ahhhhh..where DID my Kleenex go to, anyhow?^_~
I see potential here, and you've got the ability to make another great piece of art. Will you write more for me? Please? For your honey? *gives you his huge puppy eyes with all his hair falling around his face and his hands wringing*
-Josh
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's a really good fic.
Well, done!
Well, done!
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i liked this one pretty good keep em cummin
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool I did not think anyone else saw the slash potential of the first movie
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hope you write more. I'm a big fan of pimms. please write more.