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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice, and much better than most PotC fanfic. The fact that I wanted more Norrington Love is my own kink entirely... Good fic
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I -love- this fic. It is one of the my favorites anywhere. The Jack / Lizzy is .. yayness! Anyways, please please update soon! ;]
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story. Please update more often. It's OK that there isn't gonna be smut so long as this lovely threesome that you've been creating can get together. Maybe just a little kissing?
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the most well written fan fic I have run across. I eagerly await more chapters.
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This fic is excellent. I'm tired of reading crap. Write more! It's up to you to save us from terrible POTC fanfics.
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September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like! Especially the last chapter. I very nearly had a headache myself after reading Jack's concussion. I think you've got him in character, which is more than I can say for myself. He keeps wanting to be overly mushy when I write him. :)
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story and lots of fun, please continue it i'm really looking forward to some fun smut
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(Woo, I gots me an account!)
I enjoyed the two new (since I last read, anyway) chapters a lot. I like how you write Elizabeth. Not many people do more with her than have her sit around and be lovey-dovey with Will. Untypical movie-heroine she may be, but her character is still a pretty messed up girl for that day and age, siding with pirates and blacksmiths and all.
I'd say more, but I'm a bit on the sleepy side. *thumbs up* Keep up the good work! ^^
I enjoyed the two new (since I last read, anyway) chapters a lot. I like how you write Elizabeth. Not many people do more with her than have her sit around and be lovey-dovey with Will. Untypical movie-heroine she may be, but her character is still a pretty messed up girl for that day and age, siding with pirates and blacksmiths and all.
I'd say more, but I'm a bit on the sleepy side. *thumbs up* Keep up the good work! ^^
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr...I'm gonna hurt Norrington!!!! I wanna kill him just 4 even thinking of killing Jack!
I understand the 'crused land' thing although I have never ridden on a roller coaster...I dunno y...but I have been on a ship...in the Caribbean no less! It was awesome! I never knew water could be that blue!
Will Norrington catch up with Jack in the next chapter?
I just want u 2 know, I'm saving all the chapters of this story on disk. I only do this 4 my fave stories! Ok & I have a lot because I have 38 disks almost full. Oh well! There r just so many talented ppl out there! Ja Ne!
I understand the 'crused land' thing although I have never ridden on a roller coaster...I dunno y...but I have been on a ship...in the Caribbean no less! It was awesome! I never knew water could be that blue!
Will Norrington catch up with Jack in the next chapter?
I just want u 2 know, I'm saving all the chapters of this story on disk. I only do this 4 my fave stories! Ok & I have a lot because I have 38 disks almost full. Oh well! There r just so many talented ppl out there! Ja Ne!
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy British uniforms, Batman! This is one hell of a fanfic!
*coughs loudly and ch on on her Diet Coke* Yes. Anyway.
This is fantastic, it really is. You have great writing talent, your story is original and interesting, everyone is in character, and Norrington hasn't degenerated into a villain. I am really very impressed. You have a few typos here and there that a spell checker would fix in a flash, and I recall being confused at one point over who you were talking about (a "he" appeared without any entrance and caught me off-gaurd), but beyond that, it's great. Wonderful. There are not enough fics out there that potray Norrington properly. Keep writing, so I can gush over your story more!
-Claire
P.S. Screenwriter Ted Elliot hath decreed, at Jack Davenport's request, that our dear Commodore's official first name is James. :)
*coughs loudly and ch on on her Diet Coke* Yes. Anyway.
This is fantastic, it really is. You have great writing talent, your story is original and interesting, everyone is in character, and Norrington hasn't degenerated into a villain. I am really very impressed. You have a few typos here and there that a spell checker would fix in a flash, and I recall being confused at one point over who you were talking about (a "he" appeared without any entrance and caught me off-gaurd), but beyond that, it's great. Wonderful. There are not enough fics out there that potray Norrington properly. Keep writing, so I can gush over your story more!
-Claire
P.S. Screenwriter Ted Elliot hath decreed, at Jack Davenport's request, that our dear Commodore's official first name is James. :)