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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was quite good. It did feel a little rushed though. If I were to offer any beta suggestions it would be that you've got a plausible story here, slow it down and flesh it out a little bit more. Us folks will still read it if it's longer, promise :)
Good job!
GG
Good job!
GG
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
never heard of a oklahoma lemon, but it was good, email if you continue it please...