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YOU MAKE JACK A SEXY BITCH! NEED MORE RAPE NOW! JACK NEEDS TO BE BUM-FUCKED EVEN MORE! HEHEHEHEHE!!!:D I LOVE YOU!!

Yay, updated ^_^

Continued ease with presenting Jack's character, and this is a tough situation! Hyou you pulled through it nicely though. My only complaint is the length - I just want to read more of it! ^_-

Am looking forward to your next update!

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I love the way you write Jack! I was giggling like mad and I can just see him having a conversation with a tree or deciding that he wouldn't be embarrassed by being...well, bare assed. *cough* Sorry, couldn't resist. Stupid puns.

Your way of writing Jack's thoughts and dialouge and you you captured his personality, such as how he speaks with his entire body, are absolutely perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Jack just decide he doesn't mind being "used" or will he put up a fight? Though you say it will be Non-Con, I'm thinking he'll just accept it, a year is not an eternity, after all. Maybe he'll enjoy himself eventually and who knows he may get some more rum, too. *g*

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Jack *is* terribly difficult to write, but I think you write him well. Interesting idea, really; wondered how he talked his way onto the ship the saved him... Nice. And, of course, you give us Jack *and* his peep bits. Very nice. ^_-

I'd say that you're doing a pretty good job of portraying Jack, thus far. Looking forward to more!

Ahhhh very interesting, Good plot. I think you got the part of Jack down. Update soon!!!