rate_review Reviews

This was a good chapter! I'm glad to finally read a story that isn't slash, and isn't always filled with graphic sex scenes-nott tht those are d thd thing :)

wow!!! I like it. And yes, i think you should do a sequal. Might be coolies.

I love this story! It's so descriptive and captures exactly what I was thinking during the movie! There are so many options for a sequel and I'm sure it would turn out great

I would like to bow before you and say thank you. I actually read this fic the day you posted it, and figured I'd reveiwed it for some reason.--0 Yup. I have been everwhere on the net looking for a Jack and Elizabeth fic. They're characters complimented each other so well, but everyone's into slash now. I'm sick of slash! I've had slash up to my earlobes! Thank you very much for writing this. I feel like sex can be held with two people of the oppisite gender now.

uh huh, see! i knew that something like that had had happened, and the mean disney people didn't want to show it! (although honestly, they said "lust" in the movie, had prostitutes in it, and lots of flesh! there was no real need for them to cut that part out!)
i've been wanting to read this ever since i saw the movie last night; i'm ecstatic that i didn't have to write ir myr myself; it always loses something that way.
anyways, enjoyed it.... how about a smuttier version next time? hmm?
and you're right... elizabeth and will are just wrong together.
i'm so happy to see that i'm not the only one who knows that captain jack sparrow is a horny bugger.... personally, i think he's more camp than a row of tents, or at least bi.
i'm babbling, aren't i?

hellfire

Very good! Little mistakes. Eh, we all make 'em. I perfer the Jack/Elizabeth pairing rather than Will/Elizabeth pairing anyway. Good good! Write more!

Well written and enjoyable, for the most part. The only bone I have to pick with you is that in the 17th century, women did not wear either bras or underwear. In fact, I don't think they were invented until sometime in the 19th century. Ok, I'm done now.
xoxoxQuarble

Uh.. they didnt wear bras and underwear back then. other than that- not bad, we was all thinking it, after all(well, I was).

I see I wasn't terribly orriginal in my review(about the knickers, that is) however, still appriciate something that isnt slash.

Great Fic!! Its nice to see another Pirates of the Caribbean Fic than isn't slash. Not that I don't like slash but I like to read all kinds of fics. Anyway keep up the good work!