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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this fan fic. It has just the right amount of bitterness and longing from Jareth and Sarah to make it nearly believable. It's a different version from what I expected actually. I like the new creatures, like the sand dude thingy. But what was Bonna?
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
. . . Omg, that was so good! Wow . . . That was just . . . yeah.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far. it seems awesome!!! i can't wait to see what happens next mwa ha hah!!!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovedr far fanfic ^^ :P those two so belong together, it's too bad there couldn't have been at least a kiss in the movie lol, but there was a big age difference between those 2 in rl O.o so it makes sense why there wasn't..well anyways..keep on writing! ^^
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September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A halfway decent story, suffering from poor editing and some corny phrases.
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September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was rather nice.. just exactly how I would had liked it to go if there was a squel. okay, maybe not exactly but still you get the idea. ;)
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story that, from the looks of it, is Going Places, but one bit of constructive criticism--weed out some of Jareth's wicked sm. Ye. Yes, I know that's part of his charm, but in chapter one alone I counted 23 of them. :) Otherwise I'm eager to finish reading this.
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I have always loved Jareth and thought he was soooo sexy! This ends as it should. Thank you!
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June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, to put it simply, that was seriously GOOD! Everyone was so in character, and the ending was so musy and cute ;) Damn, I'm kind of scary when I'm hyper.AnywAnyway, loved it!!!