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I bit my tongue!

chomping away on nuts... almonds... *munchmunch* *pop another in* *munchmunch* *pop another in* *munchmunch* *pop another in* reading... not really paying attention to my tongue.. who the H3[[ pays attention to their own tongue... well if you arent kissing... or licking icecream... sudden mind spitting pain!!! I mean the kind you try to jerk away from...

and the nauseating taste my blood... Id make a horrid vampire I swear!

anyways it lucky I dont need to type with my tongue to leave a review b/c it swollen quite abit now.. Im sure no one could understand if I talked...

yup Sarah Gerald lapdance causes near fatal tongue injuries!
you will have to post a new warning

I ADORE YOU! I am so glad you keep feeding my Labryinth addiction! And you are a phenomenal author! So...YAY! And I'm going to read your original right now.

CHICKENS!!! Gerald keeps having visions of the labyrinth with his headaches... he has to be Jareth!!! if you take the story title into account... maybe he... Gerald.. is Jareth wish for a life he gets to win Sarah's love...


and i love you storys! so Im glad its gonna be 22ish chapters!!!

ooooh gods i dont know... Im loving the twists and turns tho and wondering where this plot is leading!!!
I literally laughed out loud when Sarah called Gerald Jareth... and giggled theru her explanation and ofcourse the sex was awesome!!!

I KNEW IT!!! Gerard IS Jareth!!! I dont know how he is Gerard... how he has a whole life here... and a sister... when only a few years have past... but he IS Jareth!

BTW... you got your Monty Python quote abit off...
The Meaning of Life
Grim Reaper: You are all dead. I am Death.
Host: Well, that's cast rather a gloom over the evening, hasn't it?

and you are sooooo mean... stopping it there.... qkjbfjkaszdfavbdkjdf gggggggaaaaaaaaaaa...

ooooooh Im sure Sarah believes Gerald is Jareth no more than we do.... but only Gerald doesnt believe.... I found the part he is jealous of himself amusing.... I wonder what his reaction would be to Sarah telling the truth of their first meeting!


ofcourse if he IS jareth... and i dio believe that.... than who is Cassie!?!?!

damn right it would be! its your duty as an author to tell! otherwise it would be someone else's story....

I love this chapter.. Ja...I mean Gerard seems to be able to get the better of Sarah quite easily!!!
this will be an interesting dinner

is Gerard dreaming about being jareth?.... i want to know why he looks so much like jareth!!!!

Bowie is rakishly handsome in that video. I can't wait to read the rest of this story, and the other as well. Keep up the marvelous work!

xoxo
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ooooh oooh Im imagining Gerald looking like bowie in the video Im afraid of Americans