rate_review Reviews

I love your story. I await the next chapter in pins and needles. I was on youtube earlier and I found a fanvid that could have been a trailer for your story it was really awesome. I'm going to try to give you the link...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9AXmjz4pcVY&feature=related

If that doesn't work it's called Jareth/Sarah - Poison by Jessethevampire. I hope you have time to look it up.

PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm on edge XD

sniffsniffsniff! Poor Toby! Poor Gerard!

I had a feeling that Toby remembered what had happened somehow, and I'm getting more and more intrigued to find out just WHO exactly Gerard IS!

Cliffy though, blast! Why must you do this!

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

I had to read this chapter twice because I was so excited the first time, I ended up reading so fast I was afraid I'd missed something!

This chapter had me thinking that maybe Toby remembers his time in the labyrinth, possibly due to dreams or nightmares since infantacy?

And as sweet as it was, I'll admit I cringed when Gerard both said that he loved her, AND asked her to marry him during his climax, but that's from a bad experience in my past to be honest.

I enjoyed seeing Jareth, I'm finding it all interesting how you've written people and characters in, though I don't agree with Moira in thinking the guy that drugged them is Zeus.

I can't wait for more! (also, I had an idea for a fanfic, though I'm not sure I could do it justice, feel free to email me if you're interested :) )

My god! This story is amazing!!!! Aw I do so want Gerard to be Jareth..... it's not possible... is it? This last chapter had me second guessing myself. I so want this to have a happy ending. You are quite the word weaver. Bravo, please do keep it up! I can't wait to read what's next- well, yes I can, but please don't make me! Haha. Again, great job!!!
~Missy Fortune

Oh good gods *jaw drop* I must say, first off, that you are fantastic. The first sex scene was awesome, the second was intense, but that rave sex sceen, dear gods woman!

I was also extremely sad when I got to the end of chapter 14 and realized there was nothing else! I need more!

This is by far one of the best fanfics I've read in ages, probably forever. On top of that your sex scenes are probably the best I've read in ever, and I read smutty romance novels all the bloody time!

I can not WAIT until you update again!

you will be happy to know... my tongue is intact... but gods that was juicy... almost makes me want to go to a rave and try E... almost...
Im guessing he is Zeus,... pooor Gerard now his sister is for sure gonna drag him off to a hospital!!! as for that guy of her... he just sunk his chances of a permanent relationship with Cassie... drugging her BigBro... even if that wasnt his intention

you are indeed keeping me off balance! dancing on... I cant wait for an update... as I check here repeatedly and than happily read away when I do... gods! Jareth I mean Gerard... and Sarah in the hallway was hot!!! but he is Jareth! he has to be... the only question is - is who's plan is it to make him Gerald!!! Zeus's meddling or Aphrodite's original plan!!!

I feel the same as Sarah.... 'His words pierced her heart, peeled layers to her soul. How did he do that? Say such particular words? If...if he wasn't him...then how...how?'
and Im left to ponder the title you choose and subsequently who all the support cast are... I mean Todd and his BOG! comeon!!! and the convoluted way the Greek Gods fit into a Laby fic... and who is believing!/woke Zeus!!!
and yes I safely navigated another chapter with no tongue injuries! wwwoooooooooooot me!

yeah this chapter I made sure not to eat while reading... and there was no sex...
but the end threw me a loop anyways... I didn't expect a kind of Spanish Inquisition.... I mean Greek Gods!!!