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December 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Need more!!!!!! He needs to learn why she came back to him!!!!!!!!!!
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November 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow! loved your characters. I like the where the story is heading. look forward to more :)
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February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!
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December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I am reading chp 4 and I like the story so far but one thing makes reading difficult. You change tenses a lot. e.g.:
"She noticed that he is still an arrogant bastard,[...]" past and present tense in one sentence keeps throwing me out of the story. It will keep ppl from reading this interesting story and this is a pity.
Thanks for sharing.
I am reading chp 4 and I like the story so far but one thing makes reading difficult. You change tenses a lot. e.g.:
"She noticed that he is still an arrogant bastard,[...]" past and present tense in one sentence keeps throwing me out of the story. It will keep ppl from reading this interesting story and this is a pity.
Thanks for sharing.
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please write more, this is getting interesting :)
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and I can't wait for the next update!
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, oh...*fans self* Another update soon, yes? *hopeful look*