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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I defintly enjoyed the new chapter, the back story and why they wanted Lizzies Heart song sung, made since. I am glad you saved our favorate officer of the law, and that you had so much put into such a little chapter. I await the next chapter with glee and joy.
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May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAY! When did you start this sequal? LOL Obviously, I havent been watching close enough. ;3 Excellent so far as I've read. I was really missing this story.
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May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Im glad Sal got there in time for Scarvy and Jareth and Sarah intervened on his behalf
him and Sal adventure are gonnabe interesting now... and eeeeewwwwwww... goblins! dont do that!
I love Jareth's story... I can see why both Fiana and Castel are out to destroy him
you know that heartsong really isnt a blessing... not for immortal creatures
him and Sal adventure are gonnabe interesting now... and eeeeewwwwwww... goblins! dont do that!
I love Jareth's story... I can see why both Fiana and Castel are out to destroy him
you know that heartsong really isnt a blessing... not for immortal creatures
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ch 10.... ooooooooh cliffy! I just pray Jareth or the police backup get there in time to save Scarvy!!! he cant died!
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ch 8... an enjoyable chapter... I like how Jareth is taking command again... (never just Sarah's lapdog) and I approve of you limiting his use of magic... (magic is just like technology... a tool to be use with intelligence not a catch all to solve every problem)
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!!! Oh no don't kill him, please you havce got to post the next cvhapter! Does Jerith save hime? Do they get closer to solving the mystery? Does Lizzie get saved? Come on don't leavce me hanging . . . better yet post two chapters please!
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I do love the new chapter, and I myself have an book published out for perchase. Loove up an auther named C M Pfeifer. Thats my pen name, the book is called Vigulantly Core, its been out for a year. You might enjoy it. Do continue with your work on this story, I am egger to read further.
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey you have great work thus far, please do contnue. I love a great mystery, and I also enjoy the fact that you have exspanded your charater base outside cannon. Please do forge forward with the story.
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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh oh oh oh oh oh that was... was... beyond beautiful!!!
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hawt damn!!! I love all the drama and plans unfolding here... I welcome the return of Sal... always liked him... I hope in the future Lizzie gets to prove herself as her mother's daughter with some might fae ass whipping! equal to everything her mother handed out at her age!!!