rate_review Reviews

Excellent story, the ending was quite surprising..yet totally fit. Thank you for the wonderful tale!

It's quite good. It's dark, of course, but the ending gave me a chill. Well done.
~Miss Fortune

An intriguing approach on Jareth & Sarah. It also opens up a whole new concept on what the Labyrinth is and how Jareth got there. But alas I am a romantic and like to see those two together and in some semblance of happy. I do support stretching the writing muscles and trying different voices/approaches so kudos to you and thanks for a compelling story that I was eager to read.

wow I dont really know what to say... even after taking the time to wash the dishes and make another pot of coffee...
I still dont know if I LIKED this story... but I know it captivated me to the very end
this story being so different from your first story...
I wonder what your 3rd one will be like!

Jareth is such a wickedly cunning gentleman. I hope that he can make Sarah bend to his will although it is good how she defies him. Sarah is the fire to Jereth's cold. If he isn't careful he is going to get his ass burned.

this story is quite different from your other... im not sure yet how I feel about it...
not to say its not well written.. it just has a different flavour... and well... tastes are odd fickle beasteys