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Aaaaah! LOL Cant wait for the end! Seriously..... not joking. @_@

ch24 and 25...
loved them... tho Im naturally sad its all finished.. it was a wonderful story... the whole plot twist with The Labyrinth was very good... very good indeed... and if you were willing I could see a second story develop telling how Sarah and Jareth deal with the Fae Counsel and the future dealings with The Labyrinth... how The Game will need to be adjusted or changed to suit the needs of The Fae and Sarah's will...
all and all... thank you for a wonderful story!

ch 23! ooooOOOOOOOH CHIFFY! you are makin it realllly hard to wait for the last two chapters!!!

ch 21.... 2 more exciting chs... the end is coming close... at least the time limit for Jareth to return with Sarah to The Labyrinth

I dont know if you planned this or not... but at the beginning of the story the Labyrinth said Jareth would die as a mortal... if his Knight's Quest fail... but didnt say he would die right away... he could concievable live out a normal mortal life span growing old with Sarah... even after the death of the Labyrinth and its inhabitants... or if Sarah stops draining the Labyrinth it may survive without either of them...

*Sigh* Eerytime I run out of story to read, I cry a little on the inside. LOL Update again soon! I really hope you can give this a happy ending! Would it really be impossible for Sarah to visit the mortal world ever again once she's Queen? Just saying.... ;)

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo my gods! I started reading this as a hum this looks like something to past the time... maybe a chapter a night... and instead read it glued to my monitor with the intensity of my stafie chewing his chewy... couldnt let it go!

as the chapters progressed even the disturbing medical drama... and for me it was quite disturbing as Ive experienced my own involuntary medical treatments as a child and young adult... didnt dissuaded me... and now Ive reached the end of ch 19...

Im hoping your updates come quickly...

I want to know what happens... with Jareth and Sarah make it back to the his realm in time... what of Lizzie... and Eric... he seems to be the next evil planner...

Yay! I was away for a while, not realizing you had kept up with this story and was excited to have another large chunk to read! I love this! It's going to be one of the stories that I actually re-read from time to time, I can tell you that. And there arent even that many published novels that I can say that about, so kudos and thanks!
-Lilly

just to give you an idea i was nearly commited due to the stress from losing my children year before last. if i hadnt left when i did i would have been in a hospital. i had a major bout of depression that the doctor wanted me in a place where she could have better access to me. IT SUCKED!

so please get them OUT OF THERE!

reading about it dosent help either.

If there was ever a reason to hate the men in Sarah's life. It is now. Jareth for thinking a little girl could handle a serious conversation without making it a secret. Eric for being just as controlling as Sarah's father. Who really needs to stop talking to Eric. I do love your Karen, most times people make her either the evil stepmother or a total softy.

Eric tells Robert that she has been off her meds even before Lizzie was born; no one has a light bulb come up of maybe she wasn't schizophrenic. Gosh! Men are stupid. I still love reading. ^___^ Can't wait for the next chapter.

Please continue!! This is so much fun to read. I started reading it as a random distraction hoping I would make myself sleepy so I could FINALLY get some rest. The exact opposite happened, I found myself unable to stop and now i'm wide awake at 6 in the morning wondering.... 'will she go with him? What will happen to Elizabeth? What's Eric up to?' You have to finish this. You simply HAVE to.