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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yikes!
poor gwyn!
loved it, though!
poor gwyn!
loved it, though!
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the new chapter. You kept it real and I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, very original and i can't wait to see what happens next!Q!!
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December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
goood work darlin I didn't even knw there was an Adult 'Net till I saw the story you posted on the original 'Net' well I think its the original but any way you did good I can't wait to read the next chap.
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December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was disturbing and uncomfortable to read as a rape scene should be. Very creative use of male rape, btw - I can't wait to see how that issue pans out later. I think you're doing an excellent job with this story.
I hope the yautja kicks the crap out of the bad blood now that he's free!
I hope the yautja kicks the crap out of the bad blood now that he's free!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Always nice to see quality writing added to the Predator section. :)
I really like the story so far. I can't wait to see where this journey leads.
I really like the story so far. I can't wait to see where this journey leads.
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, how lovely to see a new, well-written fic on here. And one that contains some real nice nasties, too! What can I say, I do fancy N/C and such evils. Do continue writing, I demand a new chapter in say, fifteen minutes. Hohoho.
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am at the edge of my seat! What happens next?! I once again love all the detail! I also like how you made it more toned down for fanfic.net, very considerate. I personally like nit-n-grit so I can read it here :). G's reactions are good. In the same situation I would prob act the same. It would be cool if you could find away to show the predators point of view at some point. Lol it is a great start regardless and I hope to see another chap soon!
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! I really hope you have another chappy ready to go a cliff hanger like that right out of the gate is cruel. Only way to make up for it is a rapid post of the next chapter.
I do really like this, it has a raw gritty feel I like.
I do really like this, it has a raw gritty feel I like.