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for In the Hollow of the Heart

by bonnyblonde

schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A happy new Year ! I´m so glad too, that you are writing a new story containing our beloved captain. I´ts like a gift for me. Hector is sexy as ever. When he handed Elizabeth his sword in the 3rd chap, i´ve had a broad smile in my face, it´s an amazing feeling for me to read or "see" him acting. Yes, more input for intimate imaginations for me.....
I hope there will be much more intimate situations for Liz and Hec ? I hope not only " willabeth ".... pleeeeeease keep writing, i´m totally curious how this will develop....!
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap 5 is an interesting answer of those questions that anyone employs: is Elizabeth really married to Will, is the marriage acknowledged ? Is she his still his wife or his widow ? Ten years at see one day ashore, does the curse break and he can go back to Elizabeth after the ten years duty if she stayed faithful ?
Should she take the whole burden and make her ( their ) fortune depend on her allegiance to Will ? Hmmm... and you gave an interesting various answer to all that. So i guess Liz had never had a chance to free Will because Calypso followed from the beginning her own goal : to keep Will for her duties.
Yes i like that !
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've only been able to read 2 chapters, but it is so good to see you writing so soon after your amazing story "Adrift". I can hardly wait to see what happens in this one. I was so sad when "Adrift" ended - thinking that it would be a while before you would spin another yarn, but it is so good to see that you didn't wait. Looking forward to reading more!

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