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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to review this chapter of your wonderful story! I'm dieing to see the finish of this erotic epic. Thank you so much for sharing! It is a story that I will read again and again! The characters are so clear, the action in my mind's eye so fervent, the emotions and the needs of the characters so well played!
Thanks!
Thanks!
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for yet another wonderful update! I can't wait for the final chapter, this has been a fantastic story!
Don't leave the update too long please!!!
Don't leave the update too long please!!!
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hate to hear there is only one chp to go!
I really do hope you will continue writing, we used to have so much Barbossa fic and now it is few and far between. You capture the essence of him so well and I'm always amazed that you're able to make each love scene exciting and new. And I don't know if I stated this before but I loved the flashback. I think more of this would be great in this fic or another.
I just hope you will continue to write!!!
The uniqueness of the character, his intensity, fearlesness, entertwined with his softer noble side makes him irresistable! I think there are a few of us out here who's enthusiasm for him has never died!
I hope there are more stories left in you to write, even if it's with an OC. I for one can't get enough of Hector!
Thanks again for the great writing!
I really do hope you will continue writing, we used to have so much Barbossa fic and now it is few and far between. You capture the essence of him so well and I'm always amazed that you're able to make each love scene exciting and new. And I don't know if I stated this before but I loved the flashback. I think more of this would be great in this fic or another.
I just hope you will continue to write!!!
The uniqueness of the character, his intensity, fearlesness, entertwined with his softer noble side makes him irresistable! I think there are a few of us out here who's enthusiasm for him has never died!
I hope there are more stories left in you to write, even if it's with an OC. I for one can't get enough of Hector!
Thanks again for the great writing!
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wahey an update!! :D
And a marvelous one at that. Thank you!
Can't wait for more.
And a marvelous one at that. Thank you!
Can't wait for more.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for more!
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have only just joined this site, and your stories were the first I read. I really hope you update this story, it has real potential and I'm already hooked!! Fantastic story, keep it up.
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hesitated so long with that review because i know that my few humble words can not describe what wonderful story you have left for us !!!
Oh my, exactly what i wanted : the first interlude between her and Hector. I read it together complete with chap. 6 and it is absolutely breathtaking hot, that i read it more than twice ! Those little conversations between Elizabeth and Hector are so sweet and amusing that i have a wide grin in my face and my cheeks are deep red like Elizabeth´s cheeks as well ! Holy, that Hector is such a passionate and randy beast with a hint of gentleman, exactly how i want him !
And now that cliffhanger...i love it, because the story goes further...
Thank you so much for updating reguarly, what would we barbossabeth fangirlies do without those wonderful stories !!!
Oh my, exactly what i wanted : the first interlude between her and Hector. I read it together complete with chap. 6 and it is absolutely breathtaking hot, that i read it more than twice ! Those little conversations between Elizabeth and Hector are so sweet and amusing that i have a wide grin in my face and my cheeks are deep red like Elizabeth´s cheeks as well ! Holy, that Hector is such a passionate and randy beast with a hint of gentleman, exactly how i want him !
And now that cliffhanger...i love it, because the story goes further...
Thank you so much for updating reguarly, what would we barbossabeth fangirlies do without those wonderful stories !!!
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bonny,
I haven't forgotten to review - just reading from the beginning and life has been real busy! I'm trying to plan the perfect time (alone) to read Barbossa & Elizabeth's first time! Thanks for being so responsive and writing it for us! I'll review as soon I read the latest chapter.
Thanks!
Lynne
I haven't forgotten to review - just reading from the beginning and life has been real busy! I'm trying to plan the perfect time (alone) to read Barbossa & Elizabeth's first time! Thanks for being so responsive and writing it for us! I'll review as soon I read the latest chapter.
Thanks!
Lynne
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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Barbossabeth. It's not a conventional or cannon ship, but it just works so well. Barbossa and Elizabeth have such chemisty. This was really well written and it felt like I was watching a movie in my head, a very hot movie ;) Thank you.
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh my *falls over in dribble puddle*. Congrats BonnyBlondeLass, this story is rather spectacular. Lovely POV from Elizabeth. Characterisation is very believable, plot is awesome and it's hot as hell. Your descriptive language is godly. This has to be one of the best Barbossa/Elizabeth fics on here ... or one of the best POTC fics here, no doubt. Thanks for uploading this treasure. Now I shall continue imagining Hector humming in a bath tub. <3