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person Bee

schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM

I read all your stories about Prime and Makela and they are beautiful. I love the addition of Elita and I hope you write some more stories of when Elita is a little bit older and how Prime and Makela fair as parents. You write them beautifully. They are so in love with each other and they make a beautiful family. I would love to read more about their story so please write again if you can. Will Elita be their only child? I am so glad that Sam is out of the picture because really this story belonged to Prime and Makela. More please!

person Payden

schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM

WRITE MORE!!!

person Lorna

schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM

I Love this and tes his voice is SEXY. WELL DONE!

person butterflies1974

schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Whoa! Wow! Damn straight Optiums voice is sexy. That was a really cool story and just perfect in length. Thank you for a great short story.

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