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Barricade's plan is *brilliant*. I have no idea what's wrong with Mikaela. If I found out Optimus FREAKING Prime wanted me I'd be tweaking for days. *Is a total die-hard Optimus fangirl* The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was Mikaela calling him "Prime". I found that out of character. But I love the story and I want Optimus to be happy... He deserves it! The 'Cons were epic in this one :)

Heh, cool how you manage to write these as one-shots,but they are a series. Poor OP...love your cade & june interact

*Raises hand* Why are they all making this out to be such a big deal? especially the autobots who are supposed to be the good guys, more understanding and all that stuff. I'm kind of disappointed in them. lol. I think Prime should be able to interface with anyone he wants as long as they are willing, except Mikeala I hold no love for her any more. Which by the way is she crazy? If Optimus Prime asked to have sex with me right now I totally would... *coughs* OK sry got a little carried away. Oh and by the way great story. can't wait till you write more! ^_^

great storyline!! read all three of this series,and you two need to keep up the good work. want to see More!!!! keep this story going!! :-)

MORE PLEASE... LIKE IT VERY MUCH...

Nice! Left it to us to decide whether he did or not. I liked it, read with a mixture of shock and enjoyment about time someone took the shine of Optimus and I'm one of his biggest fans! I wonder how this will all pan out for him... :)