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for Underworld: Beginnings

by crimsoncoral

person Anami
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this story's got only one review! I really love it!
The characters are a bit different from the movie but they look really interesting and it's so hopelessly romantic. I would just change one thing: could you try to move apart the different paragraphs? It would be easier to read.
I can only hope you are going to write more soon.
And what is "hp.com" I saw it in your profile?
person Liv
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Please update :)

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