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This is an excellent story, please keep it up ^-^

Wicked! I just came across this story and I think it's marvelous. I can't wait for the next chapter. You do ample justice to all of your characters.

You could definitely include more stripping men. I approve.
I love your style and vocabulary. Its not often I am treated to such literary delights. Props.

YAY!! Haha! I was so happy to see this chapter!

I have to say, first off, when I read the title to this chapter, I chuckled and immediately started singing that song to myself (heh, yeah, I remember the lyrics...o.O). That part with Jareth, his riding crop, and the "Scarface" quote was wonderfully lewd and a great segue to the strip-off (pfft! Not like stripping Fae?! Impossible!!). On the one hand, I kinda felt bad for Sarah there - I mean, how unfair was that, having them tease her so? On the other, what a lucky girl to have all that eye candy! Haha.

Jareth's reaction to seeing Draco was both kinda what I expected and not. I think I expected more of an explosion of fury from him, but given the setting and the way you've written him so far, I rather like what happened. It was humorous while still having touch of seriousness about it. And I loved the explanation about how Sarah ended up in the labyrinth to begin with - creative and very interesting.

Uh oh! Only five days left for Jareth to win! Can't wait to see what happens next and if he will!

~cu-kid

"Scarface". Yay!! I want a cookie. LOL. I don't mind waiting for your updates, as they are *well* worth the wait. As per usual, I found myself sucked into the story, and felt as though I were there. And who wouldn't want to see the Draco/Jareth shirtless-off. God bless your sister!! And you, for writing this amazing story, for both her, and sharing it with us as well. I have a feeling that the shit is really going to hit the fan. I am not so worried about Jareth getting his kisses, Sarah is primed and ready for some Fae lovins' from him, but I can't help but wonder what is going to happen when when she finds out about the bet. She would be pissed at the both of them, not just Jareth, but still. *whines* anwho...I can't wait to read more.

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This is a really good fic. I hope you update soon!

So, I found this story through another author's recommended reading list, and I have to say that I am so incredibly happy that this is a relatively new story. I certainly hope that you continue with it; it's well written and I'm enjoying it immensely. Cheers!

- shadow

Aw, I enjoyed the fluff in this chapter! Jareth saving Sarah from the dastardly 'quake and Draco's spying eyes (wish she hadn't stopped Jareth from nailing him! Grr!) was cute and funny. I like how he's teaching her to use more of her magic and tried to teach her to shapeshift (will she, I wonder...?).

One of my favorite parts of this chapter is when Jareth is reflecting on his parents and how he grew up. I think I just loved the "he was going to make sure they remembered him until the day they died," line about his kids - because that just sounds so like him. I'm more and more interested in this magical dresser and how, exactly, it works, too. Does Jareth know what it is/does? Hmm...I'm guessing Atlantis for the Fire Swamp 'cuz it's the only island I know that sank...Oh! And I can't wait to see how Jareth takes advantage of Sarah's Favor - I have a feeling it may not be very noble or knightly :)

You know, I've realized that, after reading this story, I will never be able to look at Hello Kitty quite the same way...

This just keeps getting better and better! Looking forward to more!

~cu-kid

Please, please, please post more! This is an awesome read. I love how you've evolved Sarah as she's gotten older. Too many fics have her as a 30-something brat or as a completely different person. You've made her believable. And the vulnerability of Jareth is just wonderful. Keep up the amazing work!!!

I love this story! It's got an original story line, which is so very refreshing. Neither Jareth nor Sarah have self esteem problems. It's one of my favorites and I keep looking forward to when you post a new chapter. Keep it up please!