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Interesting story, I think it's good. I can't wait till the next chapter.

I'm enjoying this so much! I think the new villian is a brilliant addition - let's see what Jareth does with that. Keep it going!

I really, really, Really like this! I love that there is plot to it, not just smut. Please have more soon!!!!

I love all the literary usage... :D Great!

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I think what makes this story so different from the others here is that you've managed to write four excellent chapters without Jareth appearing. And, instead of just wishing he would pop up, I find myself more interested in Sarah's thoughts about her past experience in the Underground. It's amazing how just the threat (or promise, I guess ;) ) of the Goblin King is enough.

I love Holly, by the way. I like that she's smart, funny, and has a no-nonsense attitude. And, yeah, I totally want to know who this guy is! At the beginning of the last chapter, when you mentioned something about Jareth changing the way he does things, I began to fear that you would do something radically different - such as having there be no Jareth anymore and this new guy being his successor. Though it would be an interesting twist, I have to admit that a Labyrinth fanfic without the infamous Goblin King would break my heart :)

I'm loving what you've written so far and am going to keep an eye out for your next update!

~cu-kid

Very well written! I can't wait to read more!

I think it's interesting so far.
When will you post again?

I'm very impressed with what you've written of this story so far. It's definitely shaping up to be a really incredible sequel to Labyrinth, and I'm looking forward to more chapters come out soon. I don't want to be waiting in suspense much longer!! You've managed to create a very good characterization of Sarah, too. She's still headstrong, smart, but not completely perfect. I also like how you don't depict her as whiny or completely hung up on Jareth after all this time. If Jareth and Sarah are to come together, I would hope it's because they fall for who the other is as a person now, and not the ideal they have of each other from when Sarah first ran the Labyrinth!
Hope to see more chapters soon!

I cant wait till the next chapter. :)

Oh, i wonder who this strange man is... o_0' (And yeah, Jareth is coming!! Wouhou!) I really love the way Sarah had to make her way to the underground, it changes from the mirror or the calling and theusual confrontation that comes with it ^^

Nice story, i really like how Sarah's personality is describe and the way you situated her in her life ^^ You have great writing skills and i can't wait to read more of it!^^