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for Breaking Barriers (Chapter 28 up)

by TheArtist

schedule May 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

To bad you abandoned this story, because you are talented.

person Anonymous
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Such a slow burn! But it's an amazing story! Please update soon!

person Kimberly
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story, I'm dying to know what happens next! Please, please update!!
person schwelty
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sad this never got completed. :(
person Davanyn
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is a fantastic story! so much fun, thank you for sharing it. when do you think you will post the next chapter, i have been spoiled by picking up the story with 28 chaptes but the end of the last one Definately leaves me wanting more ;) i do like how you made the crystals seem sentient, and that fact that Jareth has either forgotten that or was never aware of it.. and i love Curlique she is something else :)
person schwelty
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I finally reached the end of Chapter 28. Good God, woman! I noticed that you put up a note to the readers but that disappeared before I could read it. Wonder what is said? I have a hunch it's life/school/job stuff. So I wish you luck on that if that's the case! ....However, the way things are going. If this story is actually gonna include...ahem..."relations", I bet it won't be for another twenty chapters! ;P So...hmm...another year or two? Hah! Just teasing! I'm just really eager to see how well your writing skills will be when it finally comes...to that. ;) Don't leave us fangirls hanging! ;D The way you have with words is exquisite! Also, just can't seem shake it off. Don't you suppose Jareth would be a little more crude by using actual foul language rather than "Underground's sake" Or "what in blazes"? Seemed a wee bit off character and I just thought I would point that out. One of the things that kept me reading is that you truly stuck with the characters' personalities without giving in to writing pure smut. I could throw any other generic character in a piece of smut and it would all fit. Not your Jareth and Sarah! :D
person schwelty
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely cannot stop reading this. It's been seven months since this has last been updated? :( Please tell me you're not gonna leave this story without a conclusion!!
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I absolutely love it. Your writing and story telling skills are fantastic. I'm very sad to see this stopped, please update!
schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More more more please!!!

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