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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my , I didn't even know that you completed this o_O I just figured now!Very good idea for an ending:)) Loved it!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I finally got a chance to read bot hof your latest chapters and might i add that they were excellent! I loved the wedding night and the part where Will unfortunately watched them through the mirror! That was brilliant! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story, i love most of your stories. keep up the good work hun!
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Another brilliant chapter! I loved it! Now I'm wondering what's going to happen next! great job! Update soon!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I absolutley loved it! I couldn't stop reading! Please update soon! I cannot wait!
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was do a vile thing to do ya wench!('m just joking, but still...) Please, 'm in a need for more.. Don't do this to me, to us(the readers) and to Jack and especially Lizzie. I liked the chappie it was nice to see them finaly in a romantic satiation... Keep on the good work!
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The fic is going great! The violence is a bit to strange for me kind of liking about Jack and Lizzie, but it fits with the character of this fic, so i like it! The night will be amazing I know it! Keep on the good work!
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so LOVING this story. Argh! Now I have to wait until the next chapter to find out how Jack and Elizabeth's night goes. I look forward to the updates. Update ASAP!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I absolutely LOVED IT! Great job! I loved the first one, also! You should definitely continue this fic!
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
too dark for my taste.. I can't help but feel really sorry for elizabeth the whole time & I cannot imagine that she can still love Jack after he raped her.. If you make the fic a bit lighter then I'll probbaly enjoy it a lot more..