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It looks like this would be a good story. It actually has a good start and it does not look like another PWP, which, while entertaining, are not very fulfilling, so I greatly hope that your goal remains as far away from that as possible. Also, perhaps it would help a bit if you specify whose POV the chapter is going to be in, I thought the 2nd chap was from Abe's POV until the second paragraph. It's just a suggestion, I won't stop reading your story just because I don't like your formating, it is YOUR story after all, but I just thought I would let you know anyways. Whatever you choose to do for future chapters I am enjoying your story immensely so please keep up the good work and I hope that you get to update again soon! =)

Cute!!!! Want more!!

i like it! abe and john, its a rare, but interesting combination: both so shy, intellectual persons, i can really see it happening. and its good someone takes it slowly for a change, all this from confessing their love to first sex in one chapter gets boring sometimes and isn´t very realistic either. poor abe struggling with how to approach myers is far better...but i wonder what that `ritual` was you mentioned in the first chapter...*scratches head in confusion* did i miss something in the movie, is it an iformation from the comicverse (which i unfortunately don´t know a bit)or a hint for further drama/action/mystery/whatever?!
anyway, i hope you´ll update soon!!

Excellent continuation. I really can't wait for the action to pick up, I find this really intriguing. More, please. :)

Oh, this is very intriguing! You have a very polished writing style, it left me wanting to read more. I'm curious to see where you'll be taking this, so please, post some more as soon as you can. :)