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Archfiend,

You're right about the story. I belong to a group on yahoo that could help me do a better job of writing, especially my Star Wars fic. I'm new to writing in this fandom, although I'm a huge fan. I plan on talking to the members and get a better persepective. Once I have the info needed, I will be updating and improving this story, as well as my other Star Wars fics.

I appreciate your honesty.

Tiffany

Not bad written, yet still strangely unsatisfactory. I mean ther are 6 chapters where luke has to fight his nightmares and in barely a chapter they have unearthed hidden recors, defeated a dark Jedi Master, and the newly reborn Palpatine. Pleae far too rushed that was should have been longer and more exciting. i mean it`s so sad to see a good story dragged down into mediocrity because there is no real climax, and the important chapters seem to be rashly written

Good. Can't wait for more.

Loved it, it is really sad though. Please get the next chapter up soon.

a great story! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!