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June 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Great story. This is the second only fanfic I’ve found for this pairing. And, no idea if you’re ever going to see this, but I’m looking for a writing partner for this movie/pairing. Basically co-writing something, or if you’re familiar with the term, literate roleplay is what I’m looking for.
If you’re interested, I guess you can contact me here (I’m very new to this site though so I’m not sure if there’s an IM feature or not). Or, I have a FFN.net account under the pen name “trickle-of-thoughts”, or I have a tumblr @laughing-at-the-sunset.
Loved your work!
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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE....write more of these :3 I've been looking for a good 10,000 bc fanfic and by far, THIS IS THE BEST ONE. For the sake of my perverse mind please continue this! <333
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it Keenstuff.
I was just surfing the site and thought, "I wonder what I'll find in this section", well, I saw your name and had to read. Now all I have to do is see the movie LOL.
Hope you are keeping well, and writing heaps.
I was just surfing the site and thought, "I wonder what I'll find in this section", well, I saw your name and had to read. Now all I have to do is see the movie LOL.
Hope you are keeping well, and writing heaps.
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hawt. I'd love to see more of these :D
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantasic! I hope for more.
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, after watching the movie? This ending is waaaay more realistic (at least I think so XD). Also, after watching the movie, she shoulda ended up with this warlord dude then D'leh XDDD!!!
I LOVE YOUR SMUT SKILLS!!!
I LOVE YOUR SMUT SKILLS!!!
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, I just watched the movie today. You know, this fic was over 9,000 times better (10,000, if fact, HARR HARR) than the movie itself. Srsly. This needed to be in the movie. In fact, all of the movie needed to be this. So liek, write moar?
Also, nom nom nom: "The sound like freshly cut meat slapping on a butcher’s table echoing without cease in his bedroom chambers"
*yummy shudder*
Also, nom nom nom: "The sound like freshly cut meat slapping on a butcher’s table echoing without cease in his bedroom chambers"
*yummy shudder*
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic :-) you really got the character of the man. Really hope you carry on with this x x
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. Great job.
Are you going to continue it or is it
just a one-shot? I would really like
to see how things develops between
Evolet and the commander.
Again, nice job on the story.
Are you going to continue it or is it
just a one-shot? I would really like
to see how things develops between
Evolet and the commander.
Again, nice job on the story.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It's well written with an interesting plot. You're write discriptions very well and manage to make the sex-scenes erotic without being trashy, which is something that very few authors can do. I like everything about this story. I would, however, like to see more of the Warlord's thoughts and perspective as well as some dialogue between the two. But other than that I wouldn't change a thing. So keep up the good work and update soon!!!