rate_review Reviews

Excellent story, although the spelling mistakes can be a bit of an annoyance. One confusing typo in chapter 18 is "Heather had fallen into severe depression over this whole matter and she had become ill with the thought that some horrid fate had befallen her father."

Whose Heather?

Besides that, good story concept, the plot it going well, although Norrington is just a huge killjoy and a freaking tyrant. Loving it so far!