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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Poor Jack! I feel so bad and somehow I feel it's my fault even though that's not even logically possible! Poor poor poor Jack!
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your Story....
What about the rape by Davy Jones... it's a dark passage but I liked the reaction of Will, who beg for Jack...
And his tear... drop by his eyes the second time... so sad !
Good job
LGS
What about the rape by Davy Jones... it's a dark passage but I liked the reaction of Will, who beg for Jack...
And his tear... drop by his eyes the second time... so sad !
Good job
LGS