rate_review Reviews

wow! i don't bother to review the stories that i don't like and i really like this. can't wait to see what happens!

This is a really great story!!! I really look forward to the next chapter soon keep up the great work!!*goes on a walk through the Labyrinth with Ondine*

Hey, just me. Thanks for kicking me in the butt with your prompting in the comment you left me. I just added the 3rd chapter. But anyway, thanks. I needed that nudge.

C'ya!

ACK! update whats taking so long?

Very sweet and gentle. I really like where you are going with this story. It has been a long time since I have read a story like this. Thank you!!!!

update soon please

I'll babysit for you! She sounds like a sweetie. Hey, you are very good at the way you write, I'm a little envious by the way you can (seemingly easily) describe details...I almost had the urge to look out my own windo to see that sunset, the way you described it I felt that I only had to look outside and I'd see it too... I wonder how much Jareth would charge me if I wanted to spend the weekend just for Astronomy lessons......Anyway, awesome job on you stories "Peaches" (lol), go sleep...I'm looking forward to more great chapters, I KNOW you can do it...

This is really good, well written and very interesting.I look forward to more.

Interesting. You definitely still have my attention. I often do wonder what the reprecussions and consequences of Sarah's winning and Jareth's defeat were. I don't think enough people really delve into that enough in their writings in the Labyrinth fandom. Great work so far!

I love any stories that feature Sarah and Jareth.

I love this one already. !!