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Good one. I found myself chuckling at lots of points in this story. Well Done!!! I can't wait until your next chapter.

You're very welcome. No, I didn't know that you were french. Very nice. And as for the last chapter...OUCH!! Can't wait to see what happens next... =D

This is a great story can't wait for more soon.

Ah, you have learned that one trick all authors have that I can't stand. Cliffhangers. I hate them. But don't take it personally. Oh and I did notice something, that to me, sticks out like a sore thumb. Sprawling court? Do you mean sparring courts? As in where one would go practice fighting? As in to spar with someone? If I've totally missed my mark, I think that is what you mean, if I am wrong, just tell me to shut up and mind my own business. It is after all, your story! Keep up the great work! =D

Glad to help! =D And this chapter was much easier to read and understand. I can't wait for the next chapter. And do get some sleep!

WoW! i really like your story, especially her determination to join the yautja. umami is really between a rock and a hard place ;-) I wonder what she´ll have to do to prove herself worthy...

Well Hello and Welcome! It's nice to see a new face here at AFF. I am thoroughly enjoying the story so far and cannot wait to see what you do with it. I do ask that for the sake of understanding on our part...please, could you use the enter key? Starting a new paragraph when ever someone new talks or thinks would be so much easier to read. And also, is it Garak or Ganak? I don't mind spelling errors, but using two names for the same character is a bit hard to follow. Other than those little things, this story is great and I can't wait to see the next chapter! =D

Wow this is a FANTASTIC story and I can't wait for more..................