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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. The humor and crazy things that were happening to her were so funny. I would have liked more detail on her birth and raising of her two twins.I feel like the ending was rushed.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I laughed a lot when she ripped his heart out. Funny as hell.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm only up to 3 so far... but this is freakin' great.... I was always afraid to read stories with 1st person narrative...but I am enjoying this terribly. I feel as though this character is giving me a plausible descriptive account of something that is actually going on.... Ha.... I can't wait to see what happens next... Some of the phrases in this story just crack me up... "The joyride from hell...." Heh heh heh.... ah...this is a nice read...
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far...... mad fun!
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice. It was really cute.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute. Very nice twist there at the end. I didn't see that coming. Congrats to you on finishing your first fic. Now go write some more! =D
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a really good twist, but a very short end *sniff* this basically screams for a sequell about what happened during their search for other gy-gen and when they find them! maybe they could find a planet for their kind to life together in peace, only taking short trips to other worlds for shifting...
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool! I loved it, thank you so much, you did a great job!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey it turned out good girl, so keep going. And when you need more help just let me know, I pull out the dictionary again and call ASAP to Canada, LOL.
Ar'Shiya
"LETS' RIDE"
Ar'Shiya
"LETS' RIDE"
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is this the end? even if it is, this story was AWESOME!!^^ i really loved it! i'm hoping that it's not finished yet, so if it isn't done yet i can't wait for the next update^^