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by Anactoria

person Lyndraco
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed it greatly so far! It is amusing, fun, and very Jack-like :-) I think you are doing a good job describing a young Capt Jack, and I think your descriptions and style of writing are both beneficial and amusing (with no hard feelings about breaking the fourth wall, that made me giggle indeed!) You have done a good job keeping it in the style of PotC. Keep writing, I look forward to many more adventures of the young Jack Sparrow
person little-dumpling
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wandered over from lj, and read your story... simply wonderful! very adorable! exactly how i picture a young jack to be... but of course he would remind his mum how "small and sweet and bouncy" he is. i really hope you continue on with this story... it's very good... thanks for the read!

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