rate_review Reviews

very VERY hot. in need of a sequel

You have a really great writing style to start with and I feel like you captured Jack's character perfectly! I even loved the Barbossa/liz pairing (oddly enough) :P All in all a really great smutty fic. ^_^ **goes to read more of your work**

OMG! I love it! Naughty Naughty grins wickedly.. Made my day! Keep up the wonderful work! You're awesome!

Wow! That was awesome! I thought the threesome at first would be a stretch to make believable, but I was a convert pretty quick. And it was hot, too. Brava!

very good x

Very nice! (I'm not much of a reviewer, but this just lets you know I was here)

Fantastic idea! Beautifully written! Naughty - well yes, but nasty, certainly not...I thought you handled the situation between these guys really sweetly. And now I come to consider it, you're pretty much spot on with Elizabeth's love-life - never realized before she does quite like all three of them at once, doesn't she! Thought the thump-thump bit at the end was a particularly nice touch. Thanks very much for posting this.

P.S. Here's an off-the-wall suggestion to finish with - perfectly ended as your story was, you missed out one of Elizabeth's paramours so how about 3 becoming 4 and you resurrecting Commodore Norrington in some way during some further voyage to further complicate everyone's situation in a sequel....not a very good idea plotwise, but he would complete the set....

You've written one of my favorite fantasies!!!!! That was hot!!!!!!!