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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very VERY hot. in need of a sequel
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a really great writing style to start with and I feel like you captured Jack's character perfectly! I even loved the Barbossa/liz pairing (oddly enough) :P All in all a really great smutty fic. ^_^ **goes to read more of your work**
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it! Naughty Naughty grins wickedly.. Made my day! Keep up the wonderful work! You're awesome!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was awesome! I thought the threesome at first would be a stretch to make believable, but I was a convert pretty quick. And it was hot, too. Brava!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good x
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! (I'm not much of a reviewer, but this just lets you know I was here)
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic idea! Beautifully written! Naughty - well yes, but nasty, certainly not...I thought you handled the situation between these guys really sweetly. And now I come to consider it, you're pretty much spot on with Elizabeth's love-life - never realized before she does quite like all three of them at once, doesn't she! Thought the thump-thump bit at the end was a particularly nice touch. Thanks very much for posting this.
P.S. Here's an off-the-wall suggestion to finish with - perfectly ended as your story was, you missed out one of Elizabeth's paramours so how about 3 becoming 4 and you resurrecting Commodore Norrington in some way during some further voyage to further complicate everyone's situation in a sequel....not a very good idea plotwise, but he would complete the set....
P.S. Here's an off-the-wall suggestion to finish with - perfectly ended as your story was, you missed out one of Elizabeth's paramours so how about 3 becoming 4 and you resurrecting Commodore Norrington in some way during some further voyage to further complicate everyone's situation in a sequel....not a very good idea plotwise, but he would complete the set....
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've written one of my favorite fantasies!!!!! That was hot!!!!!!!