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More sex less talking. I demand more action.

OMG! So in my dreams there is definetly Captain Jack Sparrow, but I didn't thought of two of them! I'm interested in what's gona happend next...Good work, luv!

Hey! I finally got the chance to read your new fic and all I can say is WOW! Fantastic! Brilliant! There is no story out there like this! Wow Jack has a son with another Governess! Please update soon! I cannot wait to read more! I loved the first chapter btw! I couldn't stop reading!

Great it's great! Thank you for the "Thank you" ;) No problemo. I liked this chappie too. ..“I’m not in love with you, you moron!”.. :DDD, no no wait .."she searched for Jack, the man who really owned her heart.".. Aww it's too good to be true ;)) I like that she admit to herself the feelings towards Jack and she is not telling herself "I can't sleep, or love the man I realy love because I'm Married to Will" to the whelp if ya ask me, but steel. Bravo

ha^^
at the beginning it was a little bit confusing for me, but I understood all in the end!
I love the way Jack meets the other Captain. I'm curious who that man really is...
I'm really excited and I hope you update soon.
(sorry for my terrible English, but it's not my first language. I understand more than I can write or speak^^)
hug you!!!

Beautiful. The way she feels with her husband and the Way she feels with Jack... I liked this chapter and i hope the next one to come soon, I'm sure it'll be great!

Pretty hot!!!!