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by sodapop0006

schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this... You captured Riddick to the T and I yet to find anyone that has been write a story that good with him and Jack. Both characterized and coming out like there characters.. I hope that makes sense.. I just loved the story! I hope you write more!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I had been in hope when I first read this that it was NOT going to be a one shot. I am still in hope that you will write more,,:) ??????
I know I would REALLY like to read more, hint hint hint.
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely story. I really enjoyed it. Very detailed and explains the links between films. Loved it!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just read a third of this first chapter but I wouldn't mind Riddick killing all the crew members... wouldn't mind at all!

*runs off to continue reading*
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh I got my wish... all dead *evil grin* those fucks deserved it!

Really like your Riddick and really like your story.

Can't wait for more ^_^
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schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good. You managed to keep everyone in character, even Riddick. :-) Loved it.

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