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that was very hot and a bit sad but over all very good

This was a great Story so far, as I have a good Picturephantasie I could imagine what happend and how.

Man, I hope for Barbossa and Elizabeth's sake there isn't a miscarriage, not exactly unheard of at that time. I can't help imagining what the future of a B/E bastard would be like; would he try to take his father's mantle as a pirate lord? Would he end up bumming around with whatever kiddies Will manages to implant on some farm girl? Endless possibilities.

bwpk

Very nicely done! You've got a true gift when it comes to writing Elizabeth and Barbossa! Some of my favorite B/E fics are yours! Loved "Take," and this one was equally as satisfying...save for Barbossa being hanged, of course.:-( Still, keep it up! More like this!

Grace

mmm...

Wow. Loved the sex, though I would have been so much happier if Barbossa had gotten out somehow. The ending was, but at the same time was not, a surprise. I enjoyed it imensely.