rate_review Reviews

feel kinda odd pointing this out but...
Sharks technically have two penises...

Ahh, I liked this. I like Maccus. And Davy. So this wins in my book. Though maybe you should break the story up in paragraphs, you know? And a completely new line for any dialogue. Just so that it's easier to read. I used to do the same thing, just write a wall of text, tee hee. Just a friendly suggestion though, it's your story to do with what you wish. =) I've long hoped that someone would write something featuring Maccus, and here it is. Thank you.