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for The Troubles of Jack

by Kilcodo

person michele
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVIN it!!!!!!!
person Naira
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Try adding more white lines in the story, makes it an easier and better read, otherwise the story itself is great
person Miya Sparrow
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! its something new, and it felt more...real maybe cause it was OC *shurgs* but I really really liked it, keep it up.

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