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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No!!! That can't be the end! Please say you're working on a sequal. Pretty please! This story is too good to end now.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU!!! *Shakes fist*
Hope theres a sequel :)
Hope theres a sequel :)
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im expecting a sequel to this.. you cant leave it hanging like that!!! *stomping feet and pouting*
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, is he having another baby? poor guy. men are just not made for that stuff.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story, and I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing this. :D
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Been reading this for a while but I just got to review now
I must say I like the plot, it's unique. I dont think I have ever seen this plot before. I like how you made John, he is very interesting like his father.
Update again soon
I must say I like the plot, it's unique. I dont think I have ever seen this plot before. I like how you made John, he is very interesting like his father.
Update again soon
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-Oh, Johns gonna kick some ass XD!!!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLZ!!!
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again what a fabulous chapter. Keep up the good work.