rate_review Reviews

Heya, great start, I can't wait to see where you go with it!

I hate to seem rude but this wasn't that good. You could have used so much more detail in his encounters. Maybe added more about his feelings, or something. It lacked a lot and could have been MUCH better. It is okay if you want something short and simple but for those who long for a good read-me-all-the-way-through fic this isn't one of them.

The end of the movie made me so sad! After watching it I was completly depressed! I am glad that the fiction writers have already begun to rewrite the story! Congrats at being the first! ;-) Liked the story but like the movie made me sad. Good work though.

This was a beautiful and haunting story,putting into perspective something I hadn't thought about at the end of the movie.Thanks for telling a warm after-tale.