rate_review Reviews

First of all- THANK YOU for writing a 300 fic, and secondly- THANK YOU for making it a Stelios and Astinos pairing- In the movie, there was always just a little more between those two and It was a godsend that you chose to develop this. Your story may not be historically accurate, but it is believable, and we’ll penned. I think you have a gift for prose- the plot never seemed too rushed, nor did it seem too lax- when the two finally locked lips, it felt like a monumental moment, which it was, but you rarely get that with fanfiction.
I caught a few spelling and grammatical errors, but none that stand out too much and are hardly worth noting.
I look forward to further instalments. ^-^
-Azalea J.

WOW!!!!! THis is such an awesom story!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Please add more chapters!!!

Ok. First of all (not reprimands or flames so rest asured) there was so not 'Too Much' dialogue there. I loved it that they talked. It gave a sort of a 'Life' to the story. Made the characters real to me. And I've been waiting to find some stories of these two ever since I went and saw the movie the first time(seen it twice now and gonna go see it once more if I have the time). For that alone I love you! This seems to be the beginning to a really fantastic story so please keep it up. I hope to read more soon.

PS: The story has a great flow to it and I love the fact that you had some of the things in (* for people to read/understand in full what you mean by them. Great story! Keep it up! =D

I loved your fic.I hope you write the next chapters soon, because I am dying to read it. This fic is simply awesome. Very well written and well... the situation the way you wrote the characters.Excellent. :) Please hurry up with the following chapters :)

This is absolutely beautiful!
Your characterization of Stelios and Astinos seems perfect to me and your writing style is very pretty. Plus the story seemed very realistic to me and fit the historical background.
I hope you continue this soon.