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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's always a good sign when an implied-slash story about a couple of not-conventionally-attractive characters like these two is so completely engrossing. Really liked the dialogue, especially the fat one's (Pintel? Even now I'm still not 100% confident about which one is which) and this was very well done. I read someone else's story which described Pintel & Ragetti as being 'obviously in love but refusing to admit it' and that's pretty much sort of what you have here - and it came out oddly touching and even a little bit sweet! The only thing is, it's pretty disturbing to find oneself kind-of turned-on by anything even vaguely relating to the character of Gareth Keenan from the UK series of 'The Office'. Yikes. That's a terribly scarey thought.