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by Jawala39

schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have i mentioned lately how much i love this story??
person rejerito
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“So there’ll be plenty more……punishment…… to come?”
“Plenty more!”
“Oh good!”
xD Too good!
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! Makes me love Jack even more! XD
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still going strong! And so quick! Looking forward to seeing what she doea to jack for that little trick.
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Priceless! That 4th chapter was simply PERFECT! I would've loved to really see Jacks face.... and you described the whole situation so well :o)
More, I can only beg for more - you're doing an excellent job!!!
Ta,
~Saskia~
person rejerito
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Let Jack have his revenge!!! <33
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GUH! This is your first attempt.....I don't believe it! This story is great....great dialog, great plot and of course great smut ;-)
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All i can manage right about now is a WOW!! And perhaps beg you to continue soon??

*BEGS*
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! I love it!! Write more, now!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic! Please write more! I want to see more of the Jack/Elizabeth goodnes!

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