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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...hmmph. It's not like they actually built sandcastles.
And that was great!! Man, Lizzie has an imagination. And I can picture Jack after what she did, just staring up at the sky, his face blank. I'd begin to worry about him!!
And that was great!! Man, Lizzie has an imagination. And I can picture Jack after what she did, just staring up at the sky, his face blank. I'd begin to worry about him!!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*
That was perfect, and realistic. I loved it.
*sigh* ... my brain has turned off, that was just romantic...
That was perfect, and realistic. I loved it.
*sigh* ... my brain has turned off, that was just romantic...
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After reading that i need a nap! BRAVO!!! Standing ovation even!!!*bows down in the 'we are not worthy style'* AMAZING!!!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. And that was just foreplay? ... I can’t even imagine what the actual sex will be like... Truly fucking amazing I’m sure!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bows*
You're the master.
I think I'm just gonna climax with Lizzie in chap.13.
You're the master.
I think I'm just gonna climax with Lizzie in chap.13.
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are CRUEL! How can you stop there? ARGH!
Btw, a bit of concrit... I never noticed this before, but after watching CotBP again tonight, then reading this update... you seem to use a lot more "ye's", "be's" and "if'ns" than CanonJack. In fact, I never heard him once said "if'n", and "ye" and "be" ('I be this', 'that be that', etc) was almost just as scarce, but they were there.
I don't know. Maybe I'm just having a bad day or something. I still love this story. I still can't believe you ended it where you did, either. Update NOW. Please. :)
Btw, a bit of concrit... I never noticed this before, but after watching CotBP again tonight, then reading this update... you seem to use a lot more "ye's", "be's" and "if'ns" than CanonJack. In fact, I never heard him once said "if'n", and "ye" and "be" ('I be this', 'that be that', etc) was almost just as scarce, but they were there.
I don't know. Maybe I'm just having a bad day or something. I still love this story. I still can't believe you ended it where you did, either. Update NOW. Please. :)
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Jack, fuck her!! What are you waiting for?!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE YOU STOP NOW????!?!?!??!?!?!?!!!!!!! YOU EVIL WOMAN!!!!!!
OMG!!! I don't think I can handle the rest of the wedding night! My brain is already in non-functional state!!
IT'S YOUR OBLIGATION TO END OUR AGONY!!!!
We want THE ACT!!!!!
OMG!!! I don't think I can handle the rest of the wedding night! My brain is already in non-functional state!!
IT'S YOUR OBLIGATION TO END OUR AGONY!!!!
We want THE ACT!!!!!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE TELL ME IM NOT MISSING CHAPTER 13 YOU COULDN'T HAVE POSSIBLY STOPPED THERE!!!!!!!!!
ACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK *thud*
sometime later....
Ok...breathing has returned to a steady rate and im pretty sure i can see straight too. Thats a good sign. Now to try walking again. Baby steps...baby steps.
ACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK *thud*
sometime later....
Ok...breathing has returned to a steady rate and im pretty sure i can see straight too. Thats a good sign. Now to try walking again. Baby steps...baby steps.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great wedding! Absolutely unconventional, but perfect. I never thought that a wedding could be so much fun. Jacks vow was so sweet (in the second attempt ;)).