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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Quite an emotional chapter as well as an action-packed one! She's had a really tough life. I hope she and Riddick can provide some stability and safety for each other, because that seems to be a rare thing for him, too. I'm not surprised that they have some sort of destiny together. Very interesting plot-wise- and continues to be very hot and sexy, too!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot stuff! I like seeing Riddick with an equally tough and passionate woman! obviously, they have some strange connection- same subspecies of Homo Sapiens, perhaps? The coincidence about being found as an infant in a dumpster (I believe that was Riddick as well) seems a little too, well, coincidental. Very sexy stuff between them. Hope you continue soon!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just an add-on from my previous: I'm not sure I effectively said what i was trying to say, which is, that I assume the parallels of her life with Riddick's are intentional on your part, and not a coincidence. When I reread what I posted, it came across to me as possibly sounding like criticism, but I actually meant the reverse! I assume you're hinting at a deeper connection than just lust. I'm intrigued.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD!
I am SO glad that you are back and posting.
Your work is so intense and enthralling and arousing. You have a serious and beautiful gift for writing. Please don’t leave again!
-Cam
I am SO glad that you are back and posting.
Your work is so intense and enthralling and arousing. You have a serious and beautiful gift for writing. Please don’t leave again!
-Cam
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im sorry you havent gotten any reviews but i really love your story and have checked it everyday for updates....more please!!!!!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, that was awesome. Yes, for Riddick's sake, write more. And make it smutty.
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot.
Please continue.
Please continue.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Will there be an update soon?
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do like your story so far - very much.
I'm looking forward to finding out about the humming and growling - sounds like foreplay to me !!
I'm looking forward to finding out about the humming and growling - sounds like foreplay to me !!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intresting